Dear Portfolio Committee,
Coming into this semester I questioned myself as a writer and how I feel I come up with the thoughts and ideas to make a worthwhile paper but can’t find the words to write to express those ideas. Speaking my thoughts has always come easy to me translating them to paper has been my struggle. I’ve managed to work towards defeating this problem I struggle with and there is still a ways to go before I’m free of this battle. Throughout the writings included in this portfolio I believe one of my biggest issues is the organization of ideas. Along with that I also tend to have very long run-on sentences which is indicative of my speaking as I tend to not stop once I’m on topic. Along with any skill it’s something that will take practice and work and an area I know as my weakness. I am however happy with the pieces included as I know its building the foundation for something that I will become better at in the future with work and practice.
The first in my portfolio is my ethnography piece titled “Who am I”. The topic covering this piece is following a friend of mine whose family has immigrated to the United States from Cambodia and him growing up mixed between two cultures. The mixture between growing up around friends who’ve been “Americanized” and going home to a lifestyle akin to something he would see in his home country and the difficulties faced with growing up in this environment are covered. The difficulty in writing this piece was describing the situations he finds himself in from both his perspective and mine but ultimately putting my words to paper to describe his situation. It prompted me to write in a “his shoes” fashion and gave me an appreciation for the difficulties in being raised in an environment with two completely different cultures.
The second piece is my memoir piece titles “Privileged”. This writing covered growing up being lower income and the lessons that come with it. It discusses how being underprivileged can affect your upbringing whether it be for the good or the bad and how I derived my ethics from this experience. I chose to write about this because it’s led to me being who I am today and provides me with the work ethic that I have and how I’ve grown. I wrote this essay by writing main ideas down first and then building upon them for each paragraph trying to keep with one idea per paragraph.
The third piece is my text wrestling writing titled “What you make it”. This essay is an overview and discussion of Jennifer Senior’s writing “All Joy and No Fun”. Senior wrote about the various studies there are regarding this feelings of parents and what can influence positively and negatively a parents view. I’ve covered a few aspects of from the writing that express both the positive and negative sides of parenting and what can influence the ideas to become a more positive thought. I also wrote briefly about my own experiences being a parent and my thoughts on being who you are as a person and your own personal thought process ultimately decides what kind of experience parenting can be for you personally.
I’ve feel I’ve progressed over the course and received a lot of feedback on my writing style and the areas of improvement I need. With what I’ve learned I know now that I need to practice in organizing my thought process and find a way that works for me. I hope you enjoy reading what I’ve written and that I will grow from this experience and learn from any input received to help me in future endeavors.
Sincerely
Joseph Hernandez